tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-588376429247025873.post2706968963759409609..comments2024-02-23T05:16:12.783-05:00Comments on VOICES FROM THE HEART: Does Your Story Have An Awesome Beginning? by Vonnie DavisMona Riskhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14923883333893160794noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-588376429247025873.post-21266966570884958122013-03-04T09:47:41.729-05:002013-03-04T09:47:41.729-05:00Vonnie and Ana,
You both have wonderful beginning...Vonnie and Ana, <br />You both have wonderful beginnings. Picked up a free book and read the first page, closed it, because the hero sounded silly. Who wants a silly hero? <br /><br />Classic opening includes violence, religion, sex, and peril...at least that is what I was told at a workshop.morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02817293003630581559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-588376429247025873.post-45852229313527045492013-03-04T08:40:57.519-05:002013-03-04T08:40:57.519-05:00Incredibly hard, Vonnie. I've worked on my ope...Incredibly hard, Vonnie. I've worked on my opening line, paragraph, and page for months. I think I've got them good now...Ana Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12325215832587691886noreply@blogger.com