Monday, May 16, 2011

WHEN DO YOU SAY, ENOUGH IS ENOUGH, ALREADY?

WHEN DO YOU SAY, ENOUGH IS ENOUGH, ALREADY?

I recently finished writing Dishing Up Romance and began the laborious trek down editing and polishing lane. I must admit, I’m one of those chronic tinkerers who can’t seem to help myself mainly because I edit, then I edit what I edited, and . . . the list goes on and on. So how do you stop being a chronic tinkerer?
Put your manuscript away for a while, if time permits, and try not to look at it again for at least a month. When you pick it up again, you’ll be amazed at how quickly errors appear.
Before you actually get into the editing, give your manuscript a quick read-through fixing only those glaring errors you can see, and for God’s sake, if it reads smoothly enough, leave it alone. I know, I know, this takes a lot of practice because we fool ourselves into thinking we’re making it better. And sometimes we are, but there those are times when we’ve changed a sentence a gazillion times only to find out later it may be right back where we wrote it the first time.

Here are the things I look for when I’m reading over my manuscript:
• Did it grab my attention right away?
• Are my characters goals clearly identified up front?
• Is the pace good? Or did I add in too much minutia that bogs down the sentence and slows the pace?
• Are there descriptive gaps in my writing, or were the descriptions over done? Examples of that might be a scene where your heroine is getting into the car to drive somewhere. Let’s say you described it like this: she got behind the wheel, plopped her handbag on the passengers seat, fastened her seat belt, turned the key to start the engine and stepped on the gas? Was it necessary to give us that much information? I don’t think so. A much better version might be, she slid behind the steering wheel and revved the engine as she pulled away from the curb. See, you knew exactly what I was talking about without me going into so much detail, didn’t you? Edit out the words that serve no function.
• Tie up the loose ends. The other side of the coin on descriptions is not giving enough information. If it’s a setting that people wouldn’t know about, make sure you’re clear and concise—in other words, finish your thought so your reader is in the moment with the character looking at the same things she’s seeing.
• Did you use enough tags so your reader knows who’s talking? One would think if it’s only two people talking, you’d be able to figure out who’s speaking, but that’s not always the case. I’ve done this on a few occasions, and it makes me back up a few sentences to figure it out. To avoid doing this, you don’t even have to use the standard, “he said, she said. You can use a gesture such as: she picked up her glass of water and sipped—she cleared her throat—she brushed a stray strand of hair away from her face. This is what I do to avoid the boring standards.
• And here’s a biggie. Always make sure your sentences read with the action first, then the reaction. If you stop to think about it, that sounds like an easy thing to do—at least, one would think so. Yet there are times when we just write it out and after reading it back we wonder why it sounds funny. Reverse the order of words and see how it sounds.
• Does your dialogue sound realistic for your character?
• Are transitions smooth without gaps?
These are all things you should be looking for. And yes, word changes are important too, but try to use five words to describe it as opposed to twenty.
So how do you know when you should stop editing? My rule of thumb is this: When I feel as though I’m going to throw-up if I read it one more time—It’s time to stop!

8 comments:

Sheila Tenold said...

I enjoyed reading your post, Carolyn. I find myself revising again and again which, as you noted, doesn't always gain us anything.

I'm editing right now and your list is perfectly timed for me!

Thank you.

Paisley Kirkpatrick said...

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm were you watching over my shoulder?? I just told my CP that if I read that paragraph one more time I would vomit. :)

I just don't think I am good enough yet, so I keep revising until I reach that wretching point. I wonder if 'that' day comes when I can say "The End" and mean it.

You gave a great list. I follow the same thoughts, but it still goes on and on. I know, I have no one to blame but myself. :)

Carolyn Hughey said...

Sheila and Paisley, I hear ya! LOL

Now, Paisley, my dear, your writing is wonderful!

Thanks for reading my post ladies. :-)

Rolynn Anderson said...

Carolyn, you are so right about editing. Someone once said to me that a revision should be an authentic re-visioning. Still, it seems that the tinkering is more doable...re-visioning the scene is a BIG task. When I edit backwards...last sentence first, etc., I'm stunned by my errors. Then when I fix those problems, I have to read the whole thing from the top. Sigh. You've certainly hit upon a dilemma for us all! Rolynn

Carolyn Hughey said...

Thanks for your insight, Rolynn. It's good to know I'm not alone in this tinkering parade. :-)

Thanks for posting a comment.

Dawn Marie Hamilton said...

Hi, Carolyn. I'm always tweaking. I think I'll try to use some of your recommendations going forward.

Mona Risk said...

Hi Carolyn, that's how I feel about my ms rigt now, but to keep going I promise myself a treat. So I'll put the ms aside for a week then look at it one last time.

Josie said...

Carolyn,
Tbanks for such great tips. I am the ultimate edit tinkerer.