Whether you want to be or not???
So this is Hawaii...isn't it beautiful? Wouldn't you love to be there?
What if I wrote that the hero and heroine looked out at the vista. What
might they see? If I describe a little of that, you are there, with
them. And you're happy. Because that's what storytelling does. It takes
you off of your couch and lands you smack dab into paradise. And this is
what we see. Palm fronds, lush green and red vegetation, the blue, blue
sky melding with the darker blue ocean.
Now, that can be bad because what if the author plunges you into a dark
underground tunnel, and maybe you're claustrophobic, and so is the
character? Or what if you're now in Scotland in a drenching downpour
about to lose control of your horse, or in a blinding snowstorm seeking
shelter before every blood cell freezes?
That's the hazard of reading a book. You could be perfectly comfortable
on your couch enjoying a great story, and the next thing you know, you
could be fighting to survive. :)
It's NOT the author's fault. It's the characters' fault. You see, they
have these goals. They want, they want, they want. And it's not easy.
Giving them what they want. All the time.
Love. Romance. Revenge. Justice. Peace. Whatever. They want it and then
somehow the author has to give it to them. They make all kinds of wrong
choices. You tell them, no, don't go that way. And what do they do? Just
like kids, they ignore you. And you say, I told you so. But now it's
too late and you have to fix their mistakes.
So here you are as the reader, perfectly fine with them being at home,
safe and sound, and they carry you into the wilds of the Amazon, or on a
race for your life in the desert--with only a half of a canteen of
water left, no oasis in sight, and you need six full canteens to
Do you ever feel you are in the setting of a book? And is that good? Or do you want to get out of it and pronto???
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